It is hard to stay in deep point of view. However, I am rewriting and rewriting to get there. On the Critique page on this website is an example of how to go from shallow point of view to deep point of view. We will be talking about that more Saturday morning. Bring something you have written. We will critique together, search for shallow point of view, and together figure out how to get it changed to deep point of view. In addition, we will do general critiques of the work we bring.
Why should we do deep point of view? It is a way of engaging the readers to a deeper level so that feel they are the characters in the story. Remember, we never want the readers jumping out of the story, if only for a moment.
See you Saturday?